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14 June 2006 @ 11:38 pm
'Out of Order', 5/5, Harry/Draco
Author: darkhavens
Title: Out of Order, 5/5
Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG-13 overall
Words: 100
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Notes: Written for stagesoflove 2006, Round 3, 'Five Firsts'. Also for literati, who used the age-old plea of 'If you loved me…'
Stage #5 - First Date.
Stage #1 First Meeting, stage #2 First Kiss, stage #3 First Argument (As a Couple), #4 First Time.

First Date

They had their first real date before the dust had even settled. The wizarding world was still in uproar, counting losses, praising heroes and rewriting history. They didn't care.

Finally, they could take time for themselves without the worry that their closeness could be used to cause them harm.

And if Draco didn't really understand why they were sitting in a darkened auditorium filled with uncouth idiots, watching things explode and Muggles fight, he didn't mention it.

He was too distracted by the knee pressed tight against his own, by the scarred fingers tangling playfully with his atop his thigh.

batmanvinnie: safe by lit_galbatmanvinnie on July 21st, 2006 08:19 pm (UTC)
Aw, that was so great. I liked it. You're a perfect example of the power of choosing one right word instead of 3 others. You manage to pack so much into each line that you honestly don't need much more explain motivation and emotion.
You SO rock. You get a kitty icon for that!
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 14th, 2006 09:30 pm (UTC)
Aaaaaaw! Adorable kitty!

And thank you. HP isn't actually one of my fandoms, but literati is a harsh taskmaster and occasionally demands fic. What can I do but write it as best I can? *g*