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12 April 2006 @ 02:40 am
'Fundamentally Altered', 3/5 for stagesoflove R2 - Arousal, #2 Plateau of Arousal
Author: darkhavens
Title: Fundamentally Altered, 3/5
Pairing: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC-17 overall
Words: 321
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Graphic Wincest
Summary: Repeated near-death experience would affect us all.
Notes: Written for stagesoflove 2006, Round 2, 'Five Stages of Sexual Arousal', stage #3 - Plateau of Arousal.
Also posted here.
Stage #1 - Desire, stage #2 - Excitement.

It's fast and furious, hunger raw like open wounds; every touch burns and scourges, cleans and purifies. There's nothing left but need and now, the base imperative to rut, to fuck, to totally consume and be consumed. It's insane, and you don't give a damn.

There's no time for naked, that's for later - if there is a later, and you're still not sure of that. There's no time for soft and gentle, tender kisses and caresses, it's a fire beneath your skin, incandescent.

Words are shapeless, harsh amorphous echoes scattering from your mouth and his in fevered gasps. You don't need to hear to understand. You can't bear to pull away to frame them properly.

His tongue's ambrosia on your tongue; his breath's the air that sustains you. His lips are berry ripe and lush, a lure - irresistible - you have to gnaw and suck and taste. He fights to do the same to you.

Hands are everywhere - ass and hair and jaw and groin, grasping, pulling, cradling, teasing. Too much, and still not enough.

Boots knock together, digging in to find the perfect spot, the optimum point of leverage - and there it is. Traction. Friction. The press and slide of seam, of zipper, quite unyielding on your cock. The pain is sweet. You return the favor.

You're riding the thigh he's forced between yours as he rubs off on your hipbone, his pelvis butting hard against your own.

You're so close, almost there, and from the stuttering of his breath you know he's right there with you. You could stay like this for hours, and you will do one day soon, but the buzzing in your ears, in your bones, in your soul, tells you this is not the time. You just need something, just the tiniest extra push to send you flying over the edge - freefalling into white space.



And that's enough.

Part Four

tabaqui: s&dkinkbyliteratitabaqui on April 12th, 2006 02:26 am (UTC)
Ooooooooh...so damn pretteh. Dude.
darkhavens: sn kink [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 12:42 am (UTC)
Thank you!

Writing these is such a rush! I may have to try second person POV again soon because it's much more immediate and visceral, at least for me. It's almost personal. :D
tabaquitabaqui on April 17th, 2006 12:52 am (UTC)
It's cool, dude.
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: hp; da ba dee [me]literati on April 12th, 2006 02:44 am (UTC)
::is in a happy place::

darkhavens: sn feral [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 12:43 am (UTC)
Hee! *is there with you* :D
*shares the popcorn*
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on April 12th, 2006 02:47 am (UTC)
You know, I love your fics. I adore them. I have to read them again and again because there's just so much in what you write, levels upon levels.

I love your fics.
darkhavens: sn damaged [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 12:45 am (UTC)
Wow. Thank you! I always get an extra-special buzz from hearing about rereads. To me that's the ultimate sign that the fic works and isn't immediately forgotten once that comment button is clicked.

Shainalady_shain on April 12th, 2006 02:52 am (UTC)
You blow me away. There's the hot; yes, but so much more: the care, the craftmanship, the attention to detail. The way that the words flow into each other, creating a rhythm; painting a flawless image in the mind.

darkhavens: sn pretty when bruised [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 12:49 am (UTC)
Thank you!

That flow comes from reading the piece aloud again and again to make sure the rhythm and cadence works properly. If I tweak a phrasing or replace a word, it gets read out again so I can hear how it's changed. Sometimes swapping out one word for another means I have to rephrase the whole sentence so the syllable stresses still fall in the right places.

It's very fulfilling to hear that it works, that it reads the way I want it to. :D
MF Luder: SPN undonemf_luder_xf on April 12th, 2006 04:30 am (UTC)
Perfect, perfect. Your work is like poetry.

As usual, I'm dying for more. Fantastic job.
darkhavens: sn bed guh [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 01:00 am (UTC)
Thank you!

More is on the way very very soon. And it's time for the Big 'O'. :D

a fiction worthy wind: Sam Watches - SPNquietdiscerning on April 12th, 2006 05:45 am (UTC)
mmmmhmmmm. that was sizzling. very very nice.
darkhavens: sn bed guh [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 01:01 am (UTC)
Thank you! It nearly burned my fingertips off typing it. :D
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darkhavens: sn feral [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 01:03 am (UTC)
How do you manage to stun me all over again with each new fic you post? Isn't there a law against such things?!

Ah, but if there was a law against it, it would just make it that much sweeter and wrong and even hotter! *g*

Thank you!

Ah, parents, what can you do with them? My mother is coming for a visit the week after next and wants to read some of this writing I keep telling her about. That's gonna be fun. :D
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darkhavens: sn rowr [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 05:17 pm (UTC)
Oh, she knows I'm a slasher, and she agrees that Spike and Xander make a very pretty couple.

Since I last saw her, I've spread my wings to include SGA and Supernatural, and I've also written hot porny fic. I have to decide what to show her, and whether it's worth the effort to introduce her to McKay/Sheppard via selected episodes, or if I should stick with Spike/Xander and Sam/Dean. That last one's a no-brainer - she was a Jensen Ackles fan before I was, so I recently discovered. She actually asked me what had taken me so long. *g*

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darkhavensdarkhavens on April 17th, 2006 05:46 pm (UTC)

I tend to see Jack/Will too but I have friends who swear by (and write) Jack/Norrington (Sparrington!).

If you like a show with subtext to spare (there's an entire episode where Rodney acts like a jealous lover because John is flirting with an alien goddess), and vampires (okay so they're space vampires which look like gothic catfish and they feed through the palm of their hand, but hey, vampires!), then SGA is worth a look. ;)
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darkhavensdarkhavens on April 17th, 2006 06:08 pm (UTC)
SGA is indeed Stargate Atlantis. And while they are showing it over here, they were much too slow about getting a hold of it, so I... improvised. *g*

And there will be no teasing - I've had to ask similar questions of other fandoms. *g*
     Mandya_phoenixdragon on April 13th, 2006 06:54 am (UTC)
Oh GOD!! But never enough for me... This is a wonderful set of ficlets!! Keep them coming!! Keep them coming!!
darkhavens: sn pretty when bruised [literati]darkhavens on April 17th, 2006 01:03 am (UTC)
Oh they're definitely gonna be coming - the next part is the Big 'O'. *snerk*

Thanks! :D
kitty_poker1: kali_sama-dean-plotkitty_poker1 on April 28th, 2006 09:18 am (UTC)
Oh, yes!!! There's nothing in the world like a bit of hot, hard, non-thinky rutting and you've described it perfectly. *thud*
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 06:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks again! *g*

Mindless rutting is so much fun to write. Especially when you can skip the step-by-step descriptions and just go for the grunting and grinding. :D