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01 February 2006 @ 03:56 am
'Almost Lost', Sam/Dean, R for kaz2y5 challenge #2
Author: darkhavens
Title: Almost Lost 1/1
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: R
Words: 537
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Graphic Wincest, biting.
Summary: Sam's kink gets him in trouble of the best kind.
Notes: Written for kaz2y5 challenge #2.
ETA: This can be viewed as a sequel to my piece 'Mixed Signals', written for the first kaz2y5 challenge. Everybody said they wanted to see Sam actually get bit. *g*

Almost Lost

They didn't even make it to the back seat of the Impala, let alone the motel they'd checked into thirteen hours before.

The hunger was too strong. The angerfeardread of almost lost you stripped away control, exposing nerves as raw as the claw marks on Dean's chest.

Dean shoved Sam back across the bench seat, not caring when his head bounced off the door handle. Curses, ripe with snatches of a dozen different languages, spilled from Sam's feral slash of grin. Infuriated, Dean grabbed two handfuls of mile-long legs and yanked, toppling Sam onto his back with a triumphant howl.

Frantic, scratched and bleeding hands slammed Sam's knees apart as Dean slid in across the seat to land atop his brother with little grace.

"You stupid, stupid little fuck! What were you thinking? What did I say about not looking the blood-sucking bitch in the eye, Sam?"

Sam bit off whatever excuse he had ready when Dean grabbed a handful of dark curls and bounced his head once, twice, three times off the solid seat.

"Don't -" bounce "- fucking -" bounce "- look!" bounce "Get it now?"

Six feet fives inches of lean, adrenaline-stoked muscle bucked up hard and tried to throw Dean off onto the floor.

Dean clung on tight, one knee sliding up to rest snug against Sam's balls in a silent threat while the other scrabbled to find purchase, a brace against Sam's continued struggles. A lucky kick brought him into contact with the doorframe, providing the leverage needed to push down into Sam's thrusts.

An elbow to the sternum stilled Sam just long enough for Dean to snatch his clawing hands and force them over Sam's head. Suddenly they were eye-to-eye, groin-to-groin, and motionless, with only the sound of harsh, hitching breaths to break the heavy silence.

"She nearly bit you, you - jackass!"

Sam's pulse spiked under Dean's grip tight around his wrist and Dean's eyes widened in disbelief.

"Oh, you gotta be kidding me!"

A dull flush spread like wildfire across Sam's cheeks, down his throat to slip beneath the collar of his shirt. It drew Dean's eyes and tongue to the shadowed hollow between his clavicles. One fast, open-mouthed kiss to that patch of fiery flesh and he was back in Sam's face, more furious than before.

"Tell me you weren't thinking with your dick back there, Sammy. You weren't just gonna let her suck you dry, right?"

Sam's erection twitched so hard it almost broke his zipper.

"Oh, man, you are one sick puppy."

Dean slid down a couple of inches and nudged aside wool and cotton, teeth dragging delicately across Sam's collarbone.

Sam whined.

"Nobody else." Dean nipped the salt slick flesh beneath his tongue and thrust his hips down as Sam bucked. "You got that, Sam? Nobody but me gets to make you this hard."

Snake fast, he turned his head and bit, hard, deep and true. Sam's voice cracked on a scream. He came.

Wave after wave of shuddering pleasure wracked Sam's frame and Dean could only cling on for the ride. Sam's breath was still stuttering in rhythm with his pulse when Dean pulled back and stared at him incredulously.

"Dude, that's not normal."


 
Je mourrai sans remords.: I heart you bitchelmo_loves_me on February 1st, 2006 04:05 am (UTC)
Um...

Homina. Homina homina homina.

That was quite hot. Mmm, I loves me some angry sex!!
darkhavens: sn brotherlove [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 09:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I think these boys have a lot of angry sex. ;)
Raven: Supernatural - Puppy dogsxeraven on February 1st, 2006 04:11 am (UTC)
Bwahahahah! That's great.

Dean would SO be like "dude, that's not normal" even after sex if Sam came just from being bitten.

Totally awesome though. And soveryhot. *fans*
darkhavens: sn feral [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

Yeah, I think Dean has a skewed and interesting idea of 'normal'. Sex with brother Sammy? Normal. Fighting off bloodsucking critters? Normal. Sammy coming just from being bitten? So not normal! *g*
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on February 1st, 2006 04:15 am (UTC)
*laughs* My character did the same thing in my fic. AWESOME.

And this was...this was...

DAMN THIS WAS HOT.

Sam needs to be bitten all the damn time.

darkhavens: sn eyefuck [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:04 pm (UTC)
Thanks! You wrote bitey fic? *hopes for linkage*

Sam is just so very biteable, and Dean looks like a biter to me - i think it's the grin and that naughty glint in his eye.
who said what now? - acostilow on February 21st, 2006 11:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
who said what now? - darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 11:22 pm (UTC) (Expand)
who said what now? - acostilow on February 21st, 2006 11:37 pm (UTC) (Expand)
who said what now? - acostilow on February 22nd, 2006 12:06 am (UTC) (Expand)
who said what now? - darkhavens on February 22nd, 2006 01:05 am (UTC) (Expand)
who said what now? - coffeegirl18 on June 12th, 2011 03:31 pm (UTC) (Expand)
the kid with the bullet soul: SN pretty boysexsequar on February 1st, 2006 04:25 am (UTC)
The last line made me burst out laughing. Priceless! Hot and sexy and WRONG, and then just so hilarious. Love it :D
darkhavens: sn no hugging [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you! The Winchester boys always make the wrong seem right. ;)
a fiction worthy wind: Desire - SNquietdiscerning on February 1st, 2006 04:31 am (UTC)
eeeeeeeeee.

I could HEAR Dean say that. Awesome.

Sam is yummy when he's about the pain.
darkhavens: sn damaged [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Yeah, Sam hurts so very prettily. *g*
Staceystaceey on February 1st, 2006 04:44 am (UTC)
Guh, this was intense and HOT!


And the last bit? "Dude thats not normal" so very Dean. =D
darkhavens: sn KAZ2Y5 [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:09 pm (UTC)
Thank you! These boys just inspire the hotness. And you know Dean has his own definition of 'normal' that's not in any dictionary. *g*
mneiaimneiai on February 1st, 2006 04:45 am (UTC)
Loved this. It was hot and steamy and hot and...er...I really am just too distracted by its hot steaminess to come up with other synonyms.

Also, Sam's a sick puppy ^.^

(IE: Loved it, loved Dean's reactions, or, more specifically, Dean's reactions to Sam's reactions...)
darkhavens: sn blues bros [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! These boys are just so hot... ;)

You just know Dean is going to drive Sam nuts with the teasing and biting now too. *g*
dru: <3 Near Kissdrvsilla on February 1st, 2006 05:25 am (UTC)
MmmmM. Serious MmmmmM. Love their tussle and their fire for each other and Sam's kink -- and Dean's various reactions to it. No one but me... Buh.♥

Hot & twisted and the right amount of Dean-concern and Dean-snark, which is a delicious mix.

Hm, come to think of it, so is this fic! Delish!

:D
darkhavens: sn damaged [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I think Dean is the possessive type. If regular biting is what it takes to stop Sam lusting after their vampy targets, then he'll just keep his pearly whites sharp and ready.

I love snark with an unholy passion, which is why I fell so hard for this fandom. Now I have three pairs of snarky boys to coo over. *g*
Nevnevcolleil on February 1st, 2006 05:29 am (UTC)
*happy sigh*

Oh, yeah.

That's about all I can say right now ;P
darkhavens: sn pyro [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D

Happy sighs are always welcome fb. ;)
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darkhavens: sn bed guh [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I see Dean as very possessive of things he sees as his, and Sammy is definitely on that list. *g*
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: dw; bump [me]literati on February 1st, 2006 08:18 am (UTC)
You couldn't be anymore IC if you tried.

Bloody brilliant!

darkhavens: sn KAZ2Y5 [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you, Pookie! *smooches you*
Pretentious McBoobies: Sam OMG /lightly on February 1st, 2006 09:23 am (UTC)
GUH!! I LOVE kinky!Sam, and the last line? Bwahahah!

I heart this fic so damn much!
darkhavens: sn phone [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I think both of those boys have hidden kinks - we just have to find them. ;)
Mylenn: spnmylenn on February 1st, 2006 01:42 pm (UTC)
*shivers* So very hot!

I'll be in my bunk. ;)
darkhavens: sn bed guh [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

Bunk comments are always extra-treasured. ;)
Sandy: Supernaturalsp23 on February 1st, 2006 03:42 pm (UTC)
Heeee! Dude, that's not normal. Heeeee!

Oh, this was great. What a job for Sam to have - chasing bitey things when he has a bite fetish. *g*
darkhavens: sn kink [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I think they both have a lot of kinks and fetishes and I'm going to have fun uncovering every single one. ;)
{AtB}: Dean and Sam from Supernaturalabouttheboys on February 1st, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
Oh my friggin' Gods! This is so hott. Maybe hotter than you intended but I'm guilty of having a...HEALTHY kink for biting.^_^

The last line is just so Dean!
darkhavens: sn feral [literati]darkhavens on February 21st, 2006 10:22 pm (UTC)
Trust me, I know how hot it is, I have a biting kink too, not just in fandom either. ;)

I started writing fanfic in the Buffyverse - Spike/Xander, so biting fic was a biiiiiiig part of my life, and I love it so much I share it with my other fandoms too. *g*