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04 January 2006 @ 03:03 am
'Bruises', for slashthedrabble challenge #57 - Old Challenges Revisited
Author: darkhavens
Title: Bruises
Pairing/Fandom: Sam/Dean, Supernatural
Rating: NC-17/Adult
Words: 500
Challenge revisited: #2 - UST or A Pairing You Have Never Written Before.
Spoilers: References the first episode.
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Wincest
Summary: Dad was gone, and Dean needed Sam. Could he be enough?
Notes: My first Supernatural ficlet. I am sure it will not be my last. literati is my fic petter and cheering squad. Thanks, darlin'.


The bruises on Sam's back sang with every breath but he couldn't quite bring himself to move onto his side. They grounded him, reminded him that this was real, that Dean was in the bed next to his; they were together again.

So, maybe the marks this time were made for different reasons, but - Dean had touched him, twice now. The first time, back ho… back there, with painful blows and tight grips, and then again, later, on the bridge, all flash and fury.

But it was real - he shifted, feeling every inch of purpling skin - not just another dream that turned to dust on waking. This time Dean was close enough that Sam could hear him breathe, slow, deep sighs that left Sam shivering in the moonlight.

Fighting the urge to reach out - to touch, to wake, to beg - Sam pressed hungry fingertips into the fresh marks on his thighs, and remembered.

Sweat-soaked, limbs quivering with welcome, enforced tension, fingers locked in spasm around the headboard bars - Sam was in heaven, but also in hell.

"Tell me."

Dean's hands clamped tighter on the backs of Sam's thighs, fingers buried knuckle-deep in muscle.

He thrust hard, eyes locked on Sam's in a relentless battle of wills.

"Tell me - you're -
not - going - to college."

Even as his body arched into every frantic thrust, Sam bit his tongue and refused to give his brother the words that longed to slip free.

"Say it!"

Hipbones clashed, locked, slid, and then Dean shifted, freeing one hand to strip Sam's cock with knowing ease.

"Can't leave us… Can't leave me. Can't -
leave - this!"

Sam's eyes screamed as he came, his knuckles sharp through skin as white as paper, fingers trying to drill new holes into old oak boards.

Dean followed him over the precipice, riding out the spasms as Sam's internal muscles fluttered and clenched around his cock. One more thrust. Two. A third, and he was done, collapsing to one side, half-covering Sam, who didn't mind at all.

Sam opened his mouth, finally willing to say, 'You were right. I can't leave you. I love you.'

The sound of a key turning in the front door sealed his fate, as Dean's reaction locked his mouth tighter than before.

In seconds his brother was up and off the bed, shimmying into sweatpants and the shirt he'd tossed away with unholy glee not an hour before.

"Dad's home! Gotta see how it went."

And he was gone, leaving Sam tangled in damp sheets, sweat and come drying on his skin. Alone.

He'd never come first.

Their dad, the hunt, even the mother he couldn't quite remember - all of that was more important to Dean than he would ever be. He couldn't live like that.

Come dawn he was gone.

Sam bit his fist and shuddered his way to climax, joints locked to keep the motel bed from shrieking out his secret.

Was it different now?

Dad was gone, and Dean needed him.

Could he be enough?
Kristin: Bi-Fandom by Literatitxrabbit on January 4th, 2006 03:08 am (UTC)
Oh my. It seems so dark!

I wish that I had soe type of experience to go along with the names and faces that you guys have shown me. I am interested. Really, really interested.

Good work!
darkhavens: sn no hugging [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:38 am (UTC)
Thank you! Your 'experience' should be with you soon. ;)

I think it's a fandom that lends itself to darker fic, and not only because of the brothercest. It's wonderful!
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: sn; mod [me]literati on January 4th, 2006 03:16 am (UTC)
ahhh, the first of many!

Love the tone of this, babe. The pairing lends itself to so much yummy angst as well as humour. Which is your next assignment :D

darkhavens: sn kink [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:39 am (UTC)
Hee! Hopefully the first of many! Thankee. :D

Humour, huh? I think i can manage that, maybe even for kaz2y5. ;)
tabaquitabaqui on January 4th, 2006 04:01 am (UTC)
Ah ha ha!
I love it, silent need and angst.
darkhavens: sn phone [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:40 am (UTC)
Thankee. :D
Amalthiaamothea on January 4th, 2006 04:18 am (UTC)
oh wow this was good. :) thanks so much for sharing.
darkhavens: sn rowr [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:41 am (UTC)
Thanks! I hoe to be sharing more soon. ;)
a fiction worthy wind: Forbidden - SNquietdiscerning on January 4th, 2006 04:27 am (UTC)
*supersonic squee*

darkhavens writing in SN????? w00t!

This was all yummy and dark and I'd never though of Sam feeling like he came second to Dean. Interesting. :)
darkhavens: sn strip [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:44 am (UTC)
Hee! I'm happy to see that others on my flist have been bitten by the brothercest bug too. :D

Hellesponthellespont on January 4th, 2006 04:33 am (UTC)
Ooh, I like that. So desperate, on both their parts. I think I might have to tune back into this show and read more fic, especially if it's as good as this one. As a wise woman once said, weird love is better than no love.

Wincest. Hee!
darkhavens: sn wincest [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:45 am (UTC)
Thanks! Wincest roolz. :D

I fell for the show itself and still haven't read that much of the fic, but there are some good pieces out there. Enjoy!
Sorrel, the artist formerly known as goddessleilasorrelchestnut on January 4th, 2006 04:51 am (UTC)
I am so happy to see you writing in this fandom now. And what a brilliant way to start! The heat and desperation in this was incredible. I adore.
darkhavens: sn phone [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:46 am (UTC)
Thanks! This fandom crept up behind me and hit me over the head. I watched 10 eps in two days over xmas weekend and I've watched them over and over since then. I'm addicted. :D
who said what now? - sorrelchestnut on January 16th, 2006 11:07 am (UTC) (Expand)
I am a fucking lady!bitchygrrl on January 4th, 2006 06:26 am (UTC)
That is perfection. That is Dean and Sam, the desperation, the things left unsaid, wonderful.
darkhavens: sn rowr [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:47 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm definitely off to a good start. ;)
Hope: supernaturalhopeowl on January 4th, 2006 12:15 pm (UTC)
OH OH! How fantastic is this?? You've started writing in another of my secret addictions. This was just GUH.
darkhavens: sn no hugging [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:48 am (UTC)
Not so secret now, huh? *g*

I got addicted over xmas and well, they are just so pretty and angsty. Who could resist?

tyrical: AP_chocsprinklestyrical on January 4th, 2006 06:12 pm (UTC)
Was it different now?
I'm wondering is it different?

I've just got so many questions.

Just because the method of delivery was different does that make it different?

Then it makes me think of Dean. What does Dean want? What does he need? What is Sam to him?

Goodness I hope there's more.
darkhavens: sn KAZ2Y5 [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:49 am (UTC)
Thanks! I love it when I can make people think and ask questions, even when I don't have the answers (yet). ;)
thanksXallthefishshealynn88 on January 6th, 2006 02:30 am (UTC)
Oh, guh! I LOVE this! It's a unique view of their relationship (hard to do at this point!) and very, very telling. And beautifully, lyrically written.

*sigh* I'm so glad you've joined the madness that is Wincest. :)
darkhavens: sn KAZ2Y5 [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! The madness has defintiely taken root. :D
     Mandy: Rapture : From skater_g8ter's icon collea_phoenixdragon on January 6th, 2006 08:19 am (UTC)
Guhhhh... GUH!!!!! The utter dark hotness!!! Oh, boy, am I a sucker for it!!! *Whimpers in need of more Dark!Dean'n'SamFic!!!! Sign me up baybeee!!!
darkhavens: sn blues bros [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:52 am (UTC)
Hee! Thanks! I know you like the dark stuff and this fandom is tailor-made to provide it. :D
belleimani on January 7th, 2006 05:57 pm (UTC)
That was angsty and brutal.
darkhavens: sn feral [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
Thanks! They're so pretty when they hurt. ;)
who said what now? - belleimani on January 15th, 2006 02:11 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Nev: Sam - Unforgiveablenevcolleil on January 7th, 2006 06:54 pm (UTC)
I am so happy you're into this fandom! :D This fic is spectacular, and I've got to check out your comm. It's a brilliant idea.

This fic is so hot... And so angsty. Dean's ferocity in bed, and these lines...

Sam opened his mouth, finally willing to say, 'You were right. I can't leave you. I love you.'

The sound of a key turning in the front door sealed his fate, as Dean's reaction locked his mouth tighter than before.

You make me appreciate the versatility of the word "guh" with this ;D

I can't wait to read whatever you write for these boys next.
darkhavens: sn phone [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:56 am (UTC)
Thank you! The idea of Dean being ferocious in bed is definitely one to ponder on - for hours. :D

These boys have so much potential for angst and heat and 'guh', I can't resist them.
iamspaz on January 11th, 2006 10:46 pm (UTC)
hmmm.... yes, I do believe I'll worship you...
darkhavens: sn bed guh [literati]darkhavens on January 15th, 2006 02:56 am (UTC)
Hee! Thanks. :D