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10 August 2005 @ 12:17 am
'Again', one for open_on_sunday challenge #124 - Addiction
Author: darkhavens
Pairing: In my head it's Spike/baby!vamp!Xander but it could be any two vampires.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Notes: I didn't sit down to write poetry...


Again

Firm skin, tart like cherries; fangs pop through to succulent flesh.
Fingers hooked and grasping, kneading, knotting, tearing, holding on.
Suck and swallow, lick and lave, kiss, caress and capture.
Duelling tongues in not so mortal combat wrestle on.

Limbs entangle, angles clash, fists and knees and elbows.
Rolling, thrusting, pounding, bone slams into skin-stretched bone.
Domination, subjugation, master, slave, brave warrior,
The never-ending struggle only serves to feed the fire.

Whispered pleas and supplications, promises and vows,
Airless whimpers, needless gasps, rough deep-throated growls.
Voiceless exclamations, wordless cries and they're complete.
Vampires and their pretty, ritualistic, mating dance.

"Again."



NEXT
 
penne4mpenne4m on August 10th, 2005 12:35 am (UTC)
You paint such wonderful pictures with your words.
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 10th, 2005 12:50 am (UTC)
Thank you. I really didn't mean to get poetic but odd stuff happens and I just go with it. ;)
rayne_y_dazerayne_y_daze on August 10th, 2005 12:35 am (UTC)
Guh!

Yes, please...Again!
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 10th, 2005 12:51 am (UTC)
Hee! Thanks. It certainly bears repetition. ;)
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: mk; fandom [me]literati on August 10th, 2005 12:52 am (UTC)
mmm, very tasty :D
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 10th, 2005 02:36 am (UTC)
Thankee sweetie. :D
tabaquitabaqui on August 10th, 2005 01:44 am (UTC)
Ahhhh, sweet.
'cherries'
Nice.
:)
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 10th, 2005 02:36 am (UTC)
Thanks. :D

I had some lovely red cherries the other day and they inspired me.
werewindlewerewindle on August 10th, 2005 02:07 am (UTC)
ooo All poet like. ^__^
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 10th, 2005 02:37 am (UTC)
Yup. Don't have a clue where it came from but, yay! :D

Thanks.
samsara_svsamsara_sv on August 10th, 2005 07:21 am (UTC)
ohh - yes it COULD be any two vamps I suppose - but I think it's good read as part of b!v!x - hehe though I'm not sure timeline-wise where it would be since it could fit almost anywhere except during the 6 weeks Angelus tax period....

beautifully written btw, scans nicely and I just love the line Suck and swallow, lick and lave, kiss, caress and capture. *sighs contentedly*
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 17th, 2005 02:47 am (UTC)
Thanks! And I will have to figure out where to slot it in so I can post the complete (so far) baby!vamp!Xander epic in one long continuous timeline. :D

I sit here and read stuff like this out to make sure it scans. *g*
(Anonymous) on August 10th, 2005 09:28 pm (UTC)
Whoooo!

Fingers hooked and grasping, kneading, knotting, tearing, holding on.
Suck and swallow, lick and lave, kiss, caress and capture.

You know, the air conditioner is just not gonna be powerful enough for this.... I'm gonna go put my head in the freezer for a bit. *grins* At least until the melting stops!

Kat Coll
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 17th, 2005 02:47 am (UTC)
Hee! ^^^fans you^^^

Thanks. :D
REMITYGIRL: YOU ROCK!! by Fanbotremitygirl on August 11th, 2005 11:22 pm (UTC)
I finally had the time to sit down and read ALL of these drabbles from the beginning...and WEEEEE!! They're a lot of fun. I really like this 'verse. Angel/Angelus is a sick bastard to keep Spike and Xander apart for so long though. I don't know how our boys were able to deal. Can you dust Angelus now?? If not dust..how about him and Dru run away for several centuries?? :) Yeah, I'm not a big Angel fan..I don't like him and Spike together and certainly not while keeping Spike away from his childe, Xander.

I do like this 'verse though...so please update soon. Thanks for sharing!!
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 17th, 2005 02:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! I love hearing from people who have read the whole thing (so far) in one go. It's like a jigsaw puzzle in my head - I know there are pieces missing but you can still see most of the whole picture. *g*

Angelus gets to live in this one - though I did have fun getting rid of 'Angel'. (Poor cat.)

There will definitely be more!
Leni: BAusleni_ba on August 12th, 2005 12:43 am (UTC)
*´purrs* Missed you and the S/X love. *purrs louder*
darkhavensdarkhavens on August 17th, 2005 02:53 am (UTC)
Thank you! ^^^pets you^^^