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darkhavens
23 May 2006 @ 06:10 pm
'Out of Order', 2/5, Harry/Draco
Author: darkhavens
Title: Out of Order 2/5
Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG-13 overall
Words: 100
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Notes: Written for stagesoflove 2006, Round 3, 'Five Firsts' - #2 First Kiss.
Also for literati, who used the age-old plea of 'If you loved me…'
Stage #1 First Meeting.


First Kiss

Afterwards, neither of them was sure who followed the other into the dusty, forgotten storeroom just a short walk from the kitchens. They only knew that they were alone at last, a solid, lockable door shutting out the world that drove them together at least as often as it fought to keep them apart.

They didn't recall the catalyst - whether perceived slight or insult, or heinous slur on someone's honour - that brought them to this point, this time, this room. They didn't care overly much.

They didn't stop yelling until their lips touched, slid and clung.

They left in silence.


First Argument (As a Couple)



 
tabaquitabaqui on May 23rd, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)
*la la la*
Yisssss.
:)
Seadreamerseadreamer on May 23rd, 2006 08:06 pm (UTC)
It is so incredibly cool to me how you manage to conjure up SUCH vivid images with so few words. Wow. Very nice.
darkhavens: island [literati]darkhavens on June 22nd, 2006 05:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you! having only 100 words to set a scene and tell a story really makes me work for it. ;)
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: hd; wltm [me]literati on May 31st, 2006 05:49 am (UTC)
WOO!

::does the dance of 'I already know what happens at the end'::

darkhavens: drarry [literati]darkhavens on June 22nd, 2006 05:52 pm (UTC)
*smooches you*

:D