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darkhavens
18 April 2006 @ 05:20 pm
Fundamentally Altered, 4/5, Sam/Dean
Author: darkhavens
Title: Fundamentally Altered, 4/5
Pairing: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC-17/Adult
Words: 258
Feedback/Concrit: darkhavens @ slashverse.com
Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Warnings/Squicks: Graphic Wincest
Summary: Repeated near-death experience would affect us all.
Notes: Written for stagesoflove 2006, Round 2, 'Five Stages of Sexual Arousal', stage #4 - Orgasm.
Also posted here.
Stage #1 - Desire, stage #2 - Excitement, stage #3 - Plateau of Arousal.




The sound of your name on his lips, the taste of his on yours, the way the words blur together, not first or last but mingled in the cool night air - that's enough.

Your head rolls back, eyes blank, unseeing, mouth open in a silent scream as your fingers scrabble for purchase, clawing furrows in the skin of his back beneath his shirt.

There's pain, pressure, suction at the juncture of your shoulder and neck, the cold burn of sharp teeth and pinched skin. It's barely noticeable through the full-body pulse and flood of release, as every nerve ending flares like sodium in water, burning bright and unbearably hot for one eternal, elastic moment.

And then the world snaps back into focus with a sickening lurch, and you realise he's still moving, still coming, the wet heat at his crotch slowly soaking into your jeans as he continues to grind against you, face buried in the curve of your throat.

He's trying to force his cries through the skin below your ear - small, high, broken vocalisations that are more sensation to you than sound. He seems lost.

Every twitch of his hips transfers itself to your cock, still oversensitive and swollen, trapped behind your zipper. You slide a hand into the closest rear pocket of his jeans and pull him closer, snug, tight, to still his movements.

The fingers of your other hand are tangled in his hair; you've gone from mindless rut to comfort in an instant. Your life is so fucking weird.

"Dean?"

"Shhh."


Part Five




 
Sylph: SN_brainsylph_ironlight on April 18th, 2006 06:53 pm (UTC)
Mmm. Very nice
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
WWDD? - What Would Donna Do?jellicle on April 18th, 2006 08:36 pm (UTC)
I'm not really eloquent today, but I think awww can explain what I want to say.
darkhavens: sn blues bros [literati]darkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D

They make me go 'aaaaaaw' a lot too.
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darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
The Grammarian about whom your mother warned you.acostilow on April 18th, 2006 09:09 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmm. *melts*
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:08 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thanks! :D
tabaqui: s&dcloserbyliteratitabaqui on April 18th, 2006 10:11 pm (UTC)
Ooh, bay-bee, that was pretteh. So very.
:)

Nice stuff.
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:09 pm (UTC)
Thankee, sweets. They're the pretty ones, I just make 'em dance. *g*
MF Luder: SPN devil may caremf_luder_xf on April 18th, 2006 10:38 pm (UTC)
You slide a hand into the closest rear pocket of his jeans and pull him closer, snug, tight, to still his movements.

So sexy.

Your life is so fucking weird.

So true and so funny at the same time. lol

And the anticipation builds for that last part! :-D
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I love seeing guys with their hands in each others' back pockets. It's a thing. *g*
kitty_poker1: Darkhavens-kisskitty_poker1 on April 18th, 2006 11:53 pm (UTC)
...small, high, broken vocalisations that are more sensation to you than sound. He seems lost.

Fabulous image. Very, very nice. Sad, heartbreaking for that moment but ultimately about unspoken comfort.

I'd use another icon but I haven't got any Spn ones. Who knew I'd be feeding back to the fic? :p
kitty_poker1: kali_sama-dean-plotkitty_poker1 on April 28th, 2006 09:23 am (UTC)
Stop the presses. I found some. *g*
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:11 pm (UTC)
Hee! I knew I'd lure you in. :D

Thank you, darlin'!
I am Derek's vocal eyebrows: hp; da ba dee [me]literati on April 19th, 2006 02:30 am (UTC)
mmm. so lovely, baby.

I'd say more but my brain has been hijacked.
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:12 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thankee, Pookie! *smooch*
Dean's girl: SN-Dean (Slide on over here)agt_spooky on April 19th, 2006 02:59 am (UTC)
Oh yeah, now that's good. :-) One minute very sexy and the next it made me go "aww..."
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:12 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D

They just beg to be hurt so they can make each other feel better. ;)
Someday you'll need to stand tall again: Supernatural - JJ Loveemella on April 19th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
Gahhhh. Love you, love this. :)
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
     Mandya_phoenixdragon on April 24th, 2006 05:27 am (UTC)
*Fans self...*

Opens mouth to speak...*

*Shakes head and fans self again...*

I love you...
darkhavensdarkhavens on May 17th, 2006 07:13 pm (UTC)
Hee! Thanks. :D
^^^pets^^^